The Bloody Beach

My Spelling Progress

I am proud of my results.  I have been practising in my house.  Week 1's score wasn't that good as I didn't practise enough.

The Bloody Beach

The Bloody Beach

Its 3am on the 25th of April 1915.  It’s pitch black. We’re all cramped in a small landing boat. I’m shaking uncontrollably.  The soldier sitting next to me whispered  “Don’t be scared.   Its going to be ok!”

The first battalion landed on shore.   “We’re next!” I whispered to my friend .  Suddenly a spark lit the whole ocean.  “We've been seen!” yelled the Commander.

I’m scared. Frightened soldiers jumped out of the landing boat.  Some drowned.  Some got shot.  It was horrifying.

Suddenly I felt a sharp pain in my leg.  I couldn’t walk.  My leg had been shot. I started shouting for help. No one listened to me.  Everyone was fighting for their lives.

I’ m private Len Andrew John and 7 months ago I was just a farm hand.  And now I am  going to die on the bloody beach.

By Andrei                            

Reflection

I am learning to write a recount.

I am so proud of being able to write a descriptive.

I found tricky to think of descriptive words.
My mum and dad and teachers could help me.
The next step of my learning is doing a more descriptive story.

                           

SALT Spelling Strategy

Spelling Graph Reflection

I am learning to learn how to spell new words and to use them in my writing.

I am so proud of being able to use the S.A.L.T Spelling strategy to help me to learn how to spell my words.

I found tricky to find the spelling rules.

My classmates and parents also teachers can help me.

The next step for me is to learn how to find the spelling rule

Maths Mansion Evidence - What is the Question ?

What is the Question?

I am learning to recognise the effect of multiplying and dividing a number by 10, 100 and 1,000.

I am so proud of being able to find all the answers to the question.

It can be tricky to divide the decimals.

My Teacher could help me with my learning.

The next step for me in my learning would be to do this task but with a different number.